Burying Betsy
(This is the beginning of what may some day end up being a book, based on my sisters and I. Just wondering if it was working so far. :) )A cackle of laughter drifted down the hall as Mr. Grounder...
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((((~Jan~))))I'm sooo lovin' it so far......I could feel myself sitting there with them, laughing to myself, as laughter is infectious...You pulled me into the scene, and left me sitting on the edge...
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Very well done Jan, the humor in this makes the story more effective-- much enjoyed.Peace,Po
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A great read Jan and surely will turn into a novel. Written with humour and passion,Maggie
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I think it's just great :) Your use of dialogue is phenomenal and the whole piece reads very naturally. Enjoyed this
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This is beautiful Jan, makes me think of my mom and her six sisters as well as her two brothers... family reunions can get pretty interesting.. :) I really loved this Jan, hope to read more from this...
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~Jan~I wanna read more....*taps her foot*....... Sounds kinda like my family.....Always,TR
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